Tuesday, 31 May 2016

LO4 Evaluation of the episode



Areas for Improvement
I feel that if we were to create another episode, we would have to ensure that camera quality was to the best standard, especially when it comes to sound as we had quite a few problems in post production. I think that the strengths from creating this product have been the organisation and the following the ideas from pre production clearly in order to create a high standard production. We all worked together to create the final product and I believe it has been very successful overall.  We have put many hours into editing the episodes to ensure that they have ended up being of high quality and follow the generic conventions of a TV show. I think that the main weakness has been the sound quality and ensuring each section has the same levels.  However since using Adobe Audition, this problem has been overcome.


Production Process
We were briefed to create a 5 minuet long TV show buy Sheffield Live! So the first thing we did was assign job roles for everyone in the team. Some of the jobs were preproduction e.g storyboards, paper work and scriptwriting. Some roles were for production e.g filming, setting up equipment and recording the sound. Finally there were roles in post-production such as editing. We made it so everyone had a role in something they either enjoyed or were talented in.  We also had to make sure that people contributed equally and everyone had a role. My main responsibility in helping create Yorkshire lasses was to write the script. I wrote 3 different episodes because if the fist episode were successful we would have created more. I also directed the scenes and controlled the positions if the cameras. Another role I had was actually acting in the show.

Key Changes/ Decisions 
Some of the key decisions we had to make were the location of the filming and the actors. We held auditions to find the write actors and went location scouting.  Another key decision was the camera set up, we decided to have three cameras in a triangle because from this we could get all the shots required. This set up also followed conventions of a soap opera because they use the same angles.  One of the major changes that we had to make was changing location. Originally in the script on of the scenes was in a bedroom but because we couldn’t fit all the equipment in the bedroom we had to change the location to the kitchen.  But overall it did not change the structure of the script. Another change we had to make was the lighting because we filmed the same scene on different days we had to use the soft boxes to give the illusion that it was lighter.

Quality
On one hand our footage was very high quality because we used two Sony HD cameras and one Sony 4K camera. These cameras insured that our footage was up to industry style quality. We also ensured that the angles were the same throughout filming we did this by putting tape down where the cameras should be, this helped with continuity. The editing was also at a high standard. It is professional ad follows the conventions of a soap opera. One thing that we did have issues with was the sound because it wasn’t a good quality but the sound was edited by members in the group in Adobe Audition. After the editing the sound was up to a high quality and could be used in the show.

Comparison
I feel that the show follows conventions of soap operas and looks very professional. I also feel that we fulfilled the brief. We had a few minor problems with having to re film to get the desire shots and miscommunication with filming dates. However overall I feel the show is up to a high enough standard that it could be televised.

Target Audience

It was important that the actor’s maintained a Yorkshire accent and fulfilled their profiles. This was important because for the audience watching they would expect the Yorkshire characters to have certain mannerisms and the accent. It was also important that the themes were suitable for the target audience.  So we ensured that the themes were relatable but had a sense of sensibility to it. The show would be aired after the watershed so we had to be conscious of that when writing the script and planning the target audience.  

Areas for improvement 
If we were to film another episode I think it would be important to film all of it on Sony 4K cameras because with the other cameras we had sound quality issues. So if we had those cameras it would ensure that the sound quality matches the video quality. Another alternative is that we could separately record the dialog in the sound booth this would also ensure the quality was good. Although we did manage to fix the sound problem by using Adobe Audition. One thing that our group was strong at was organisation from paper work to filming we managed to keep on the production schedule and everyone put a lot of hours into creating it. I feel we have ended up with a high quality TV show that follows the conventions of a soap opera. 






Thursday, 26 May 2016

LO3 Offline edit


Evaluation:
The first shot used within this offline edit will probably need to be changed due to it being shaky and of of general low quality. The clips used in the nail bar scene are all usuable, but it might be good to add some more to vary the shot type. Also, there are points in the nail bar, as well as other parts of the episode, where the audio will need some work due to it being too loud/quiet. When it comes to the scene between Hannah and Matt, the clips are generally in the correct place, we were thinking that we would add an effect to the clips and a transition between scenes in order to signify the flashback. The same would be applied to the scene with Bella and George as that is also a flashback. When Matt punches Reece, we will need to dub the sound and add a punch sound effect in order to make it more realistic. The overall feel of this offline edit is what we are wanting to achieve in the final episode, there are just some editing techniques that need to be added and some clips that may need to be swapped round.

LO3 Evidence of editing


Saturday, 30 April 2016

LO2 Distinction Criteria


Yorkshire lasses follows the genre of a soap opera because it uses a shot reverse shot editing technique. This makes is to the audience can see the conversation from each character. This also shows their facial expressions and body language. This is very common in shows like Coronation Street and Eastenders. The show also follows the genre with its camera angles, the show uses close ups to show the characters facial expressions. This is very common in soap operas because when something dramatic happens the camera will show a close up of the characters reaction. We have tried to pastiche this technique in our own work. For mise en scène we have put a dark filter on some scenes to connote that those events are in the past. Many other soap operas edit the footage to connote that it was in the past. Another convention of the genre is lighting. A lot of soap operas have natural lighting. So when making the show we did have to use the soft boxes because there wasn’t enough natural light. We successfully gave the illusion of natural light.

Friday, 29 April 2016

LO2 Merit criteria

The show we have created is fit for purpose because it follows the conventions of a soap opera. I feel the target audience would want to watch the show as it has relatable themes and characters. I also feel that the show would fit the proposed scheduling time of 9pm because this is around the time that our target audience will be watching television. Also many other soap operas are aired in the evening. The show also fits the narrative theme because the character are talking about relationships and going out together. This fits the themes of a teenage soap oprea.

Thursday, 28 April 2016

LO2 Rushes






Here are the rushes for the filming at the nail bar. 

My role for this day of filming was to act as the part of Cherly, and help set up/pack away equipment.



 nb27-
This clip is from a section of the nail bar scene where the girls are talking about Amy and Ryan. I think that the framing of the clip is really good as you can fully see Hayley, Hannah and Jenny, and the over the shoulder shot of Bella is done correctly. The audio of Bella is slightly muffled due to her facing away but most of it is perfectly audible.

nb26-
This clip is the same as nb27 but isn't the full thing. This clip isn't really useable as it messes up as Bella says her line before Hayley says hers the end. Also the audio is slightly quieter at the beginning.

nb25- 
The audio at the beginning of this clip is a lot better than nb27 and nb26. However the part where Hayley says 'I was just tryna lighten the mood' is a bit too quiet so possibly making this clip unusable. 

nb24-
This clip is meant to go after Cheryl has finished her story with Jeremy and Carl. The framing of this clip is done well and the audio is pretty consistent all the way through. This clip runs very smoothly overall so would definitely be a possibility to use within the final product. The laughter within the clip between the girls is very natural as well. 

nb23-
This clip is unusable as the girls all start laughing as soon as the acting starts. However, the framing and quality of the clip is good.

nb22-
This clip is the same part of the episode nb27/26/25. I think that the clip is fine but not as smooth as the other ones so this may not be the right one to use.

nb20-
This clip is unusable as Flic interrupts the acting due to the positioning of the frame not being correct.

nb19-
The quality and framing of this clip is perfectly fine, however it is probably not useable as the girls get some of the lines wrong so the end isn't finished properly.

nb18-
This clip is the first scene from the nail bar. It would be fine to use, however the framing and quality of this clip isn't as good as the others above. It isn't unusable just not as good as the others.

nb16-
This clip comes after Cheryl has told part of her story between Jeremy and Carl. It can't really be used within the final episode as the girls are supposed to laugh after Cheryl says 'I can't help that all the boys want me' and without that the scene doesn't really make sense.

nb15-
This clip is a lot better than nb16, however the laughter within the scene needs to be more prominent in order for things to carry on and make sense.

nb14-
We tried something different in this clip as Bella mimics what Hannah says, the girls laugh after and Jenny says 'Alright Frankie'. After doing this we decided that the mimicking was good but Jenny just stick with just saying 'Alright guys'.

nb13-
The framing and content of this clip is really good, therefore I think that this clip is completely fine to use.

nb11-
The framing of this clip was good as it was a good over the shoulder shot but Blaze often looks at the camera and smiles/laughs therefore meaning we can't really use this clip.

nb10-
The framing and audio quality of this clip is good and nothing really goes wrong so I think that this clip would be a good one to use.

nb9-
This is the same part of the script as nb10 however Hannah slightly messes up her lines so this clip isn't needed. Also, Jenny looks down to her magazine quite a lot so its obvious that she is looking at her lines.

nb8-
This clip is not useable as it is just Hannah talking while the camera is still on.

nb7-
The first part of this clip is perfectly useable, however the girls start laughing towards the end, therefore probabaly meaning that we can't use it as this part needs to be just one shot. 

nb6-
This clip is unusable as the girls all start laughing due to Blaze saying her line a lot louder than before.

nb5-
This clip is when Cheryl is explaining why she got with her lads brother. The framing and acting is all completely fine in the clip therefore meaning it would be able to be used in the final product.

nb4-
This clip is the same as nb5 and again it would be good to use in the final thing.

nb3-
This clip is the first few lines of the nail bar scene, it starts off fine and the framing is good, but Blaze drops a nail polish which causes Bella to start laughing therefore meaning we can't use this clip.

nb2-
This clip could be improved in terms of the audio but I think it would be good enough to use in the final product.

nb1-
This is just a clip of us being quiet to see if there is any background noise. This obviously won't be used in any part of the final show. 

Clip 1-
This clip is unusable as it just a behind shot of Bella with laughter in the background.

nb28-
This clip is perfectly fine to use as the framing and audio is good.

nb29-
This clip is probably the best out of the few we got for this section of the nail bar scene. The audio is really good and the framing is fine. Hannah pulls a face at the end but it should be fine to edit out.

nb31-
The first part of this clip can't really be used as Hayley starts laughing. Also the audio isn't as good in this clip therefore making it less likely to be used.

nb32-
The first part of this clip is really good. The quality is very good as well as the framing and audio. Also the fact that it is a close up of the conversation between Hannah and Bella works really well.

nb36-
This clip would be good to use in the final product as the framing and audio is of a fairly high quality and the acting is all good.

nb35-
This clip is just a few seconds of in between takes, it does not need to be used.

nb34-
This clip is all fine, apart from the fact that Miss made the point that Hayley needed to be a bit louder.

nb33-
This clip is slightly too loud and the end goes wrong so it can't really be used.





ah1-
This is a mid shot/close up of George and his reaction of finding out 'Amy' is pregnant. This clip is good as the camera is set up well and the lighting is appropriate in order to convey his emotion. We ensured there was no background noise in order to make the scene as dramatic as possible-therefore this clip is definitely fit to use in the final product.

ah4-
This is a mid close up of George and Bella acting as Amy as Ryan. It is the moment when Amy tells Ryan she is pregnant. I think the positioning of the camera in this clip is very effective as we can see the reaction of both people. The lighting is also good therefore meaning that this clip can definitely be used.

ah7-
This clip is another shot of just George. The positioning and lighting is all good up until the end as George's head gets cut off when he stands up straight. Therefore this means that the start of this clip would be fine to use but the end wouldn't due to the camera positioning.

ah5-
This is a mid close up of Bella and George side profile. The lighting is slightly dark but I think that is appropriate for the content of the scene as it is quite tense. The positioning of the camera is fine as well as they are both in shot and can see their reactions clearly. The end of this clip is unusable as George hits the other camera so the filming had to stop.

ah2-
This is a clip of George coming through the kitchen door. The lighting is slightly too low and the camera positioning isn't quite right in order to capture the feeling of the scene. This clip could still be used but there are others that would be more suitable.

ah3-
This clip is a mid close up of George. The lighting and camera work is suitable for the content as it is the most tense part of the scene, therefore darker and closer footage is more suitable.

ah6-
This clip is similar to ah3. The positioning is slightly better as there is no window in the background of the shot. The lighting is again very suitable for the context of the scene, and this clip could definitely be used in the final product. 


Full Evaluation:
The work above showed that we could fit the purpose and create an extract of a soap opera as we had enough camera shots and angles to change them and convey meaning. The close up camera shots fit the genre as they are able to capture the emotions of the characters. Also it fits the teen drama genre as they are able to capture the attitude of the girls. In terms of mise-en-scene we used high key lighting to connote that it is daytime and that although the episode can convey some serious themes, it is also to show the scenes, especially the nail bar, to be quite lighthearted. We used background music for sound in the nail bar scene to show the conventions of a nail bar and to add a bit more to that scene, this therefore causes the episode to be fit for purpose and complies to what is needed for our genre.  

Saturday, 23 April 2016

LO2 Job Roles

Bella:
  • Filming
  • Acting
  • Editing
  • Storyboards
  • Footage Log
  • Edit Log
  • Rushes
  • Risk Assessment
  • Recce Sheets
  • Call Sheets
  • Costume Designer

Hayley:
  • Filming
  • Acting
  • Editing
  • Storyboards
  • Footage Log
  • Edit Log
  • Risk Assessment
  • Recce Sheets
  • Call Sheets
  • Costume Designer
  • Location Scouting

Brooke:
  • Filming
  • Editing
  • Location Scouting
  • Costume Designer
  • Hair and make up
  • Title sequence
Flic:
  • Filming
  • Editing
  • Storyboards
  • Set designs
  • Audio

 Hannah:
  • Filming
  • Acting
  • Script
  • Director/producer

Andre:
  • Filming
  • Audio
  • Risk Assessment
  • Budgeting
  • Legal and Ethical
  • Lighting

James H:
  • Filming
  • Call sheets
  • Foley artist
  • Lighting
  • Location Scouting for the Nail Bar
  • Moodboard
  • Risk Managment Plans

James B:
  • Filming
  • Title sequence
  • Editing
  • Storyboards for title sequence

Alex: 
  • Filming
  • Rushes
  • Footage Log
  • Storyboards
  • Sound

Chloe:
  • Filming
  • Offline Edit
  • Moodboard
  • Set design
  • Photographer for the Nail Bar
  • Location Scouting for the Nail Bar


Molly:
  • Offline Edit
  • Moodboard
  • Location Scouting for the Nail Bar
  • Set design

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

LO2 Evidence of filming



Here are some photos from filming. In this I acted and directed the shoot. 

Friday, 11 March 2016

What we did over the holidays

Over the holidays we filmed for 2 days. We filmed al the non nail bar scenes. We are also planning to film the nail bar scenes on Friday

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Monday, 22 February 2016

LO2 Setting up appropriate equipment

Whilst we filmed the nail bar scenes  I acted and helped direct the cameras. These are photos of our group setting up the equipment e.g the camera to film it and the soft boxes to add more light.

This Brooke setting up the sony camera.

This is Bella and I putting together the light box, the room was well lit but was quite harsh so we used the light box to make it softer.


This is Flic and Brooke sorting out the white balance on the cameras so they matched when we were filming.  


This Jennie and Hayley running through lines together 

This is Alex setting up the tripod to keep the cameras steady. 

This is Flic and Brooke setting up the camera on the tripod 


These are the props we were provided with, these made the nail bar look more realistic. 





This is Alex setting up the camera to be ready for filming 

This is Flic discussing with Miss Edwards about the camera 



This is Alex and Brooke positing the cameras for filming




This is the actresses reading through the lines and doing a practice run before filming. 





This shows the 3 point camera angle we has set up for filming. 


This the cameras we had set up for filming. 





This is Alex getting the angle of the actresses. 



This is Flic filming with the moving camera.